First Thoughts on Project 3

I keep thinking about my project 3, and I'm pretty sure my next move will be looking up more information about Port Jefferson and adding it int my paper smoothly. Also, I know that I need to add detail so that the audience can picture Port Jefferson just as well as I can because it would be a pity if they couldn't understand what it looks and feels like. It's such a wonderful place that I want to share it with the audience. If they've never been able to go, I want them to feel like they have visited after reading this. I think I want my paper to flow better as well. Right now, I don't think it's accommodating to the reader. I can see everything perfectly but I need to step outside of myself and view it from the audience's perspective. I could get the reader involved a lot more.