1. My purpose in writing about Port Jefferson was to inform the reader of a place in which I feel two ways about. The two ways aren't blatantly obvious, as we were asked to describe them as two different shades of gray and not make them seem black and white. I want the audience to know exactly what Down Port is like.
2. My audience for this piece of writing would be the inquisitive traveler or even people that are locals to Port Jefferson because they may not be informed of their town's history.
3. Rhetorical moves that I use are imagery, argumentation, and persuasion. These moves could be more developed because of the lack of time that I had to write the actual paper.
I think I should try being more descriptive and being more interested in my own writing. If I'm not interested; my reader will definitely not be interested.
4. I think the whole paper needs further development by using more history and facts and by adding more imagery so that the reader can feel more informed about the town.
5. My question for Prof. Lay is: What did you mean by depicting it in two different shades of gray instead of black and white?
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